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"Mako-chan!" Makoto heard a familiar voice after practice. 

He turned to see Nagisa, running towards him, butt naked. 

"Nagisa, aren't you cold running around the locker room naked?" Makoto said, heaving a sigh.

"I was just so excited to hear that tomorrow is you and (Name)-chan's one month anniversary!" Nagisa said. 

"Y-yeah," Makoto said, his face burning. He had spent all day trying to think of a present of some sort. He even tried asking Kou if she knew any interests (Name) had. However, nothing new came out of that. As the four boys changed in silence (well, except for Nagisa ranting about the anniversary) Makoto contemplated if he should ask for help from them. Even if they didn't know her interests, they could at least help him, right?

"Guys," Makoto stopped and said as they left the school. "I need your help."

"Oooo with what, with what?" Nagisa asked.

"I have no idea what to get for (Name)-chan for the anniversary," Makoto said, straight up. "She's so mysterious, I don't even know her favorite color. I'm utterly lost, so please?"

"OF COURSE!" Nagisa said excitedly.

"I believe I have some spare time," Rei said, fixing his glasses.

"Sure," Haruka said bluntly.

Makoto felt a string of hope forming. "Thanks, guys."

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"How about this?" Nagisa said as he posed "sexily", holding a dress on a hanger against his body.

"I don't think (Name)-chan likes dresses," Makoto said. 

"How about this?" Rei said, wearing butterfly wings.

"I don't think she likes butterflies either."

"Makoto," Haruka said, approaching him with a mackerel suit on. 

"How about NO." Makoto sighed. Trusting these guys was starting to look like a bad idea.

"Hm..." Nagisa said, thinking. "Maybe if you get her something you believe she will like, she'll like it."

"What kind of philosophy is that..." Makoto mumbled.

"Nagisa-kun might be right," Rei said. "If you tell (Name)-san that you thought she would like it, she might actually like it."

Makoto thought about it. They might actually be right. Then he smiled. "I guess you're right, huh? Sorry for bothering you guys about this, but you really helped. Thanks."

Nagisa, Rei, and Haruka gave each other the "we did something right" look. "You're welcome, Mako-chan!" Nagisa said.

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"(Name)-chan!" Makoto called as he spotted (Name) in the hallway.

(Name) turned, her expression the usual: Her eyes were half open, dark circles under her eyes, and her (h/c) hair effortlessly tied in a ponytail. However, these features made her look adorable, kind of like a lazy cat. Her (e/c) eyes twinkled in the afternoon sunlight. Makoto grabbed her hand and led her to the art room. He decided to give her the present after school, because according to Nagisa, "it builds suspense". "What's going on?" (Name) said after the settled in the art room.

"Um..." Makoto said, feeling his face burn. He always felt slightly nervous around (Name). "Today's our anniversary."

(Name)'s cheeks showed a hint of pink. "Y-yeah."

"So um..." Makoto felt his palms get sweaty. He took out a small box. "Th-this is a present. You know... Happy Anniversary kind of thing." He forced a smile, hoping she would like what was in it.

(Name) slowly received the gift. She opened the box, and inside was a silver chained necklace featuring a small face of a Siamese cat, smiling adorably. (Name) stood with the opened box, her head pointed to the object.

"L-look," Makoto began to say, hoping she wouldn't hate it, "I swear it was last minute, I'm so sorry, it was better than the mackerel suit Haruka chose, please don't get mad, ple--"

Makoto was interrupted with a kiss. He managed to kiss her back, moaning a little. His heart beat increased as he realized she had liked the present. He whimpered as she inserted her tongue, which Makoto hoped wasn't going to be a habit since it got him extremely excited in the lower region. It felt so good inside her mouth, it was crazy. He couldn't hold in his moans and whimpers, so he let them all out, slightly embarrassed. He wondered how (Name) held in all her pleasure cries. 

(Name) broke the kiss, leaving a trace of her saliva on Makoto's lips. He felt light-headed, and his face felt like it was going to explode. 

"That was my present from me to you," (Name) said, her face red. "Happy anniversary."
AW YEAH TONGUE KISSES :iconyeahplz:

*ahem* Anyway.

Thank you so much for the feedback on this fanfic my lovelies. ;w;
You guys are awesome for keeping up with my rushed shit and everything :iconlazycryrollplz:

This is the epilogue, btw, just in case people were wondering what "Ep." stands for (it didn't fit in the title LOL)

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Epilogue HERE!

EDIT: OH HEEY. Here's some gay porn to the ears. ._. www.youtube.com/watch?v=rUaBhb…

Just letting it out there...
I think I'm extremely perverted.
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lnfluenze Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oho, Reader-chan, you bold girl, you. (;
Loved the whole story and you ended it with a bang with this epilogue, just.. great job, guntopa.~
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kmeah Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Marluxia Faint 
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IGame101 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconyeahplz:
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guntopa12 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:iconyeahplz::iconravesplz:
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Puppypancake Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2013  Student General Artist
yay awesome story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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guntopa12 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much!!! ;w; :hug:
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Puppypancake Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Student General Artist
yup! :iconglompplz:
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bel-bunny Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013  Student General Artist
leaving him with a boner
happy anniversary 
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guntopa12 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:icontobiapprovesplz: that's how I get stuff done around here.
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bel-bunny Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Student General Artist
hell yea
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AnimeOtaku8888 Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Im sad this is the end :(
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guntopa12 Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm sorry ;w; It had to end someday :shrug:
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AnimeOtaku8888 Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
True
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Valeria1314151611 Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2013
I loved this so
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guntopa12 Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Glad to hear that! :hug:
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Valeria1314151611 Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2013
Write some more free!! I love this so!
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guntopa12 Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I might, I'm not sure.
I have two other fanfics, so maybe after I get done with one of them. :iconstressplz:
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Valeria1314151611 Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2013
Then i shall wait!!
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Hanatsuki89 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
The last one already? Nooou T___T I'm going to miss this...
I love your writing style! I think this was actually the first time I felt glued to the chair while reading a fanfiction *__* :heart:
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guntopa12 Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yes, it's the last one ;w; I'm sorry. :hug:

Thank you so much! :iconasdfghplz:
Thank you for reading ^w^
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alison99554 Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2013
Noooooooooooooooo! How could yo do this to me! When it said 'he got excited in the lower regions' *drools a little* *meanwhile in my head* WHAT DOES THE FOX SAY!~ Man YouTube got to me -.-"
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guntopa12 Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I tend to excite people, and then ruin it by ending the series. 
I AM EVIL :evillaugh:

Don't worry, when I wrote it, my ovaries exploded. And it wasn't even a lemon.
Like, that's how much I am obsessed with Makoto. ._.
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alison99554 Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2013
Plz make another Makoto x reader story then ;_;
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guntopa12 Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I would if I had time ;w; 
I am probably going to write one later...
Like majorly later. Probably a month later xD
Maybe I'll make it Halloween Themed? :shrug:
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alison99554 Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2013
I don't mind! Why did free! have to end though! Hopefully it comes next summer :) I can't wait for the story and the next season!
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guntopa12 Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I know! D:
I need the second season :iconnaoplz:
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EeveelynKiriuyy Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
AWWWWW THAT WAS PERFECT YAY Thank you :iconepictackleglompplz:
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guntopa12 Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you for reading! :iconoldschoolownedplz:
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TheMewtwoLady Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Still the best x Reader fanfic I've ever read.  You should be proud!!
Yeah tongue kisses!!  And the mackerel suit - I DIED.
Just keep on being :iconfabulousplz:!
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guntopa12 Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconcryforeverplz: You my dear reader, is the best.
Thank you so much for reading, lovely :iconlazycryrollplz:
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TheMewtwoLady Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:icondragonpetplz: You're welcome forever!!  It was such a pleasure!!

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guntopa12 Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconsupertighthugplz:
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TheMewtwoLady Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconloveloveplz:
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kanayatheblackwolf Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013
Yeah tongue kisses! Wait no lemon? Awww but I'm expecting one :( , but anyhoo i love your makoto x reader fanatic, it brings Makoto's lustful side of him! And that is AWESOME.
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guntopa12 Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm sorry for not writing a lemon ;w;
I'm just not in the mood, and I need to think of new sexy ideas if I want to write another lemon :XD:

Thank you so much for reading! :iconsupertighthugplz:
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kanayatheblackwolf Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013
You're Welcome!!
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kanayatheblackwolf Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013
*Fanfic
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meganeouji Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013  Student Filmographer
I'm going to miss this, but good work! I really liked this story! 
I hope you write more in the future! c;

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guntopa12 Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh my, thank you so much! :iconletmehugyouplz:
I won't make any promises, but I'll probably write another Makoto x Reader... A MORE PERVY ONE :evillaugh:
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meganeouji Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Student Filmographer
SOUNDS PERFECTLY GOOD FOR ME PLS DO *A*
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joannagaviene Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2013  Student
OH MY GOD. :iconsamyesplz:
This is so good! Amazing job and keep it up!
I can't wait for the next one :icondeanspazplz:
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guntopa12 Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
There is no next one... :iconlazycryplz:
Glad you liked it though! ;w;
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joannagaviene Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013  Student
:iconmiseryplz:
Oh, I didn't read the description, I was so hell bent on commenting right away! :iconsweatdropplz:
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guntopa12 Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It's okay, I do that sometimes too :XD:

There there :pat: ;w;
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joannagaviene Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013  Student
You and me buddy, you and me :iconsupertighthugplz:
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