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"You okay now?" Makoto asked after (Name) calmed down.

(Name) felt herself get red. She didn't mean to cry in Makoto's arms. In fact she didn't even expect herself to cry at all. "I-I'm sorry," she said, rather embarrassed. She pulled herself away from Makoto.

"Oh, it's fine," Makoto said. "It's okay to let out your feelings." He smiled.

(Name)'s heart skipped a beat. "Uh... Um... I think it's getting late, right? And your friends are waiting, right? So, maybe I should go..."

"You don't have to," Makoto said. 

"N-no," (Name) said, about to explode. She had to get away from Makoto. She was too embarrassed. "I'll leave. I forgot to feed my cat." She slipped by and rushed down the dirt stairs, not looking back, even though Makoto called her name over and over again.

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"You didn't have to go home!" Kou complained on Monday after school.

"Sorry..." (Name) said, feeling shameful. 

"You should have stuck around," Kou pointed out. "And maybe you two would have walked home together, in the dark, and then you two would have kissed..." 

"K-Kou!" (Name) said, her face burning. "Don't say ridiculous things!"

"You know you wanted that..." Kou said, smirking.

"M-maybe..." (Name) replied, looking away.

"OH HEY, MAKOTO!" Kou said suddenly.

(Name) made a slight yelp and hid behind Kou. Then Kou started to laugh. "Wow, you actually fell for that, senpai?"

"Y-you tricked me..." (Name) said, suddenly embarrassed.

"You see that? You're trying to avoid Makoto again, aren't you?" 

(Name) nodded.

"Look, you shouldn't be embarrassed about saying you feelings. It's your feelings for him, and if he has a problem with that, he can deal with it! Right?"

"Y-yeah..." (Name) said.

"Good. Oh, hey Makoto," Kou said.

(Name) jumped. She turned around, and this time, Kou was for real: Makoto was walking towards them, his hands in his pockets. 

"Hey," Makoto said casually. "Mind if I borrow (Name)-chan real quick?"

"Nope, take her," Kou said, smiling.

"Wait--" (Name) said.

Makoto gently took (Name)'s hand. He started to walk, and (Name) followed. His large hand was warm, but not sweaty. She felt like she was being fried like bacon. (Name) realized that Makoto was leading them both to the art room. As the both entered, the room was empty. The sun was still high up in the sky, since it was still summer. Makoto turned to (Name), his hand still holding (Name)'s. 

"You're avoiding me again, (Name)-chan," Makoto said, almost sad.

(Name) gulped. He looked like a little puppy that was thrown into the street. "I-I haven't..."

"Why do you do that?" Makoto asked, taking both of (Name)'s hands. "Why do you not want to be with me?"

"I'm just really embarrassed, okay?" (Name) fired back, looking down at the floor. "Saying that I love you... In such a situation... I was really nervous!"

"So you were avoiding me, thinking I don't feel the same way towards you?"

(Name) blinked. She looked up to see Makoto rather serious looking, only his whole face was red. He looked like a toddler upset about not getting the right Christmas present. "You don't like me... Right?" (Name) managed to say, trying to handle his adorable features.

"I don't like you, I love you," Makoto said, his eyes glassy. "Why don't you understand?"

(Name) froze. "Wh-wha... No... You don't." 

"I do, (Name)-chan!" Makoto demanded, a tear trickling down his cheek. His green eyes were filled with tears. His grip on (Name)'s hands loosened.  

"H-hey..." (Name) managed to say out of shock. "Why are you crying...?" She moved her hand up to Makoto's and wiped his tear away. 

"C-C-'Cause," Makoto sobbed, "Y-you're so nice. But y-y-you think you're n-not."

(Name) smiled hopelessly. "Thanks. I didn't know I was such a good person."

Makoto smiled, tears still flowing. "N-now you do." He was slightly blushing still, his green eyes twinkling in the sunlight.

Without thinking, (Name)'s lips were on Makoto's. It was a sweet, gentle touch, like two innocent first graders. Makoto's lips were soft and angelic. As (Name) pulled away, she saw Makoto's bright red face. His green eyes were widened. 

"Uh... I... Um... I wasn't ready..." Makoto started to mumble in shock.

(Name) blushed at his adorable actions and interrupted his mumbles with another kiss. This time, Makoto seemed to be ready. He kissed back, trying his best to be gentle. He pulled (Name) closer, and he wrapped in his arms as the kiss became more rough. Makoto moaned slightly as (Name) slipped her tongue in his mouth. He continued to whimper as the kiss became rather passionate, while (Name)'s arms dangled around Makoto's neck. 

(Name) pulled apart for air. She panted and saw how lustful Makoto's eyes seemed. 

"One more time," Makoto begged, his green eyes shining with pleasure.

(Name) blushed. "Alright. Only one more time, though."

However, the two continued about five more times.

And the swim club waited and waited... But Makoto did not come to practice that day. 
OH SHIEEET.
Crappy writing, hell yeah. :highfive:

I think this is the last chapter...
I have no idea.
I might make an epilogue ;w;
Thank you for reading, y'all!

Part 1 guntopa12.deviantart.com/art/W…
Part 2 guntopa12.deviantart.com/art/W…
Part 3 guntopa12.deviantart.com/art/W…
Part 4 guntopa12.deviantart.com/art/W…
Part 5 guntopa12.deviantart.com/art/W…
Part 6 Here! ^^
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kmeah Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
oh my lord that ending :iconblushingtamakiplz: Blush Junko Enoshima (Kawaii Blush) [V5] Ai Fuyuumi (Blush) [V1] Marluxia Faint 
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guntopa12 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
oh man, sorry I didn't reply to you (you commented like 5 or 6 months ago oh myyy I have neglected this account...)
thank you for reading ;v;
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Cillox Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014
IT'S SOOOOOO GOOD♥___♥ I LOVE IT♡
GREAT JOB
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guntopa12 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
THANK YOUUuuu :heart: :iconblushuplz:
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Meganmathews123 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Da feels!!!! My frozen tear ducts just melted and waterfalls came out of my eye's!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is amazing!!!!!
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guntopa12 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
AGHHghdfkjs Thank you!! ;w; :hug:
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Meganmathews123 Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Yourcwelcome x3
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Angel434 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I LOVE IT!!! Neko Emoji-37 (Yay) [V2] 
i'm wondering how many people requested a lemon after this ???
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guntopa12 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
THANK YOU!! :iconblushuplz:
I think only a few people requested one, but I never did one :/ I did make an epilogue though.
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VoidTheDragon-Slug Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014  Student General Artist
OMG THAT WAS SO CUTE AND FLUFFY I CRIED!! GREAT JOB!!! :D
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guntopa12 Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
hfkdajg THANK YOUU ;w;
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AngelRider1212 Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2014  Student General Artist
ERMA GERD this is so gaaaaaaaaaaaaaah why you no real Makoto
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guntopa12 Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I ask myself that everyday xD
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OtakuGirl14 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2014  Student Digital Artist
IT'S SO FLUFFY!!!!"
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guntopa12 Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:iconitssofluffyplz: i'm sorry that's all I can think of xD
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OtakuGirl14 Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014  Student Digital Artist
He he me too
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mangaanimefanforlife Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
this was so sweet 
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guntopa12 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Glad you liked it!
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Syarachaan Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2013
This is one of my most favorite fanfics in deviantart! Seriously I love how this story touches me, it seriously felt like I'm actually there and not just sit and read.

Your one talanted writer!
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guntopa12 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
oh my >///< I'm really happy that you liked it! ;w; :hug:
Thank you so much! :heart:
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Syarachaan Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013
Your welcome! :)
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LittleNympa Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013
amg ;n; Is this the ending?

Noo. I want more :c
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guntopa12 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I made an epilogue ^w^ here it is ---> guntopa12.deviantart.com/art/W…
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LittleNympa Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2013
Omg, Thank you <3 
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guntopa12 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
you're welcome ^w^
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bel-bunny Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013  Student General Artist
"Uh... I... Um... I wasn't ready..." Makoto started to mumble in shock.
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pfffffffff
Pikachu-lol 
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guntopa12 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
He's such a dork :iconfacepalmplz:
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bel-bunny Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013  Student General Artist
yea but hes like one of those cutie pie dorks
its kind of attractive though
Llama-Emoji-02 (Blush) Bunny-Emoji-10-(Emoji-Lovet) 
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guntopa12 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I like dorky guys :iconohohoplz:
yeah this is why i'm single :iconyeahplz:
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bel-bunny Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Student General Artist
thats what i got and hes super shy

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animegirl007 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013
Great ending :nod:
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guntopa12 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much! :iconbrohugplz:
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AnimeOtaku8888 Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Please dont end!
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kanayatheblackwolf Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013
My lemon senses are tingling!
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guntopa12 Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Sorry no lemon ;w; *dies*
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Mandabexy Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
WHAT?!?! THAT'S THE END?!?! NOOOOOOOO, IT'S CAN'T BE!!!! :iconaackplz: I NEED MORE, MORE, MOOOOOOOORRRE!!! :iconburnchizuplz:
*deep breath*
Ok, maybe I can accept that...
Man, I'll miss this story :iconmanlytearsplz:...
Make a epilogue, pleeeeease!!! >.<
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guntopa12 Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh my, I didn't know it would be missed THIS much :XD:

I'm working on it right now! >.<;
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himaruyes Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Onhonhonhonhonhonhon~ I wonder what we were doing =3=


I'm so funny ehuaheuahuh no.
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guntopa12 Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hahaha!
I just think they were making out and spending quality time together hahahaha

"Quality time"... :iconohohoplz:
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OokamixChan97 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Student Writer
MY FEELS OMF (o;TωT)o please make an epilogue ;u;
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guntopa12 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Working on it~ ;w;
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OokamixChan97 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Student Writer
Bless you ;w;
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guntopa12 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh my, thank you so much ;w;
I haven't been blessed for a loooong time :XD:
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OokamixChan97 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Student Writer
Hahaha XD you're welcome~ maybe this blessing will come in handy then x3
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guntopa12 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Maybe :XD:
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OokamixChan97 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Student Writer
XD
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EeveelynKiriuyy Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
HAAAAAAAYYYYYIIIIII~ I Need a epilogue Please :iconpweaseplz:
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guntopa12 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'll make one~ ;w;
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MMHinman Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Omg best ending ever0-0
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guntopa12 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh my, thank you so much TwT
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