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Finally. Today is the day.

(Name) stared out the window playing with her ponytail as the teacher blabbered on about how 4 would be x if 2x + x = 12. She couldn't care less. Today, finally, for the first time since the pool was cleaned and filled, it was raining. Honestly, (Name) didn't find rain so great. However, she loved rain that day. 

Rain means no swim practice. No swim practice means an empty pool. Just thinking about it, (Name) felt excited. She loved swimming, even though she wasn't an expert at it. For some reason, swimming was the only exercise that she was fond of. 

"Hey!" a whisper interrupted (Name) thoughts. She turned next to see her classmate, Makoto Tachibana, smiling pleadingly. She didn't like the sight of him. He was too adorable, and made her nervous. But she didn't necessarily like him. Instead, she wanted to feel more invisible around him. Perhaps it was because he was the only one that noticed her existence. 

"What is it?" (Name) asked, annoyed. This was probably the third time that period in which he interrupted her daydreams. 

"Sorry, but I can't catch up to the teacher. Can I borrow your notes?"

"Sure," (Name) said, handing him unfinished notes. She didn't mind, since all the information was in her mind anyway. Having a photographic memory was sometimes an advantage. However, it can be a disadvantage.

A HUGE disadvantage...

(Name) put that thought aside. She didn't want to have those memories to come to her mind again. The whole thought of it disappeared when the bell rang.

"Stand," the teacher said. "Bow."

Students rushed out, talking excitedly over the loud crowd of people. "Where to now?" "Let's go to the Game Center, yeah?" "I wanna go to the Karaoke..." "I gotta study!"

So lucky... (Name) thought. She sometimes wished she had friends. It wasn't necessarily because she was a mean person, but because she was extremely socially awkward. She only talked to people when she was talked to. She had never had a crush, and if she did... Oh God forbid. She would be a nervous wreck talking to him. 

The only friend she did have was a pencil and a paper. Not only did she love drawing but she loved writing as well. She was somewhat famous on a fan-fiction site, and she had improved so much in drawing over the past few years. 

(Name) took her time as she walked downstairs to the ground level. She didn't want anybody seeing her "trespassing". When all the students seemed to have gone (especially the noisy swim club), she jumped over the fence. She stripped down her clothes (she was wearing her bathing suit under all of her clothes) and put on a cap and goggles. It was freezing in the rain, but she managed. 

(Name) got on the diving board. Her legs were shaking. She hadn't dove off a diving board in ages. She bent down, her right leg straight and her left leg bent. She remembered to keep her eyes to her knees before diving, or else she'll end up belly-flopping. She took a deep breathe and pulled on the diving board and pushed herself out. She splashed in the water, successfully diving without belly-flopping. She swam freestyle, since that was the easiest stroke in her opinion.

About thirty minutes later, (Name) decided to get out. She climbed up the edge of the pool. She took her goggles and cap off, leaving her hair down. She never had it down, but since it was cold, she thought it would help. She walked over to her towel and covered herself.

As (Name) turned to the locker room to change, she saw a figure. It was Makoto. He was bluntly staring at her, giving her the "Who are you? What are you doing here? Are you new?" face.

For some reason, (Name) felt embarrassed. Was it because she was in a swimsuit in front of a boy? No, that wasn't it. Embarrassed and panicking, (Name) ran for the open gate. "I'm sorry!" she said.

"H-Hey! Wait up!" Makoto called out to her. 

No way in hell, (Name) thought as she ran home barefooted in a swimsuit in the rain. 

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"Achoo!" (Name) sneezed as she walked to school. It wasn't raining anymore, so she felt upset. She couldn't swim today. A part of her told her that she should maybe ask the swim club if she can swim in the pool. However, that won't work. They would forget about that arrangement in about an hour.

Instead of worrying about her cold, (Name) had other things to worry about. Makoto would probably ask her why she was swimming in the pool, and why she couldn't ask him about permission to use it. Just thinking about talking to the overly nice idiot was giving (Name) goosebumps. The worst part was that Makoto and (Name) walked the same way to school everyday. Not that that was a problem, since Makoto was always talking to Haruka, his best friend.

On the concrete stairs to the right, (Name) heard it: Makoto's voice, sounding excited. She decided not to make eye contact. She continued walking, but still walked slow to be close enough to hear what Makoto was talking about with Haruka.

"...then when I opened the gate, I saw someone swimming. At first I thought it was you, Haruka. Then I waited a few minutes until I found out it was someone else. The person got out of the pool and it was a girl."

It took (Name) a while to realize that Makoto didn't know it was (Name) swimming in the pool yesterday afternoon. 

What an idiot... was all she could think of. However, she felt her face get warm. He had called her pretty. She never really thought of herself as pretty, but average. 

"And what does this have to do with me?" (Name) heard Haruka say.

"Well, I thought maybe you would know her," Makoto said. "She had (h/c) hair, (e/c) eyes, and she was about (height)cm tall."

"I don't know anyone that fits that description," Haruka said. "And I don't care."

"Aww," Makoto said. "C'mon, Haru-chan. She was super pretty. I want to know her more."

"Maybe Nagisa will know who your girlfriend is," Haruka said, sounding like he really didn't care.

Makoto laughed. "Now now, Haru-chan, she's not my girlfriend..."

"Yet," Haruka added.

(Name) couldn't believe them. They were literally talking about her behind her back without noticing they were even talking about her. She sighed, never knowing she would regret swimming in the rain.

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"Hey, (Last Name)-san," (Name) heard a familiar voice call out to her. She turned to see Makoto jogging over to her. 

"What is it, Tachibana-san?" (Name) asked. She decided to speak formally since they weren't necessarily friends, just classmates.

"Your notes from yesterday. I wanted to give it back," Makoto said, handing her the notes.

"Thanks," (Name) said, taking the notes. She turned to walk away when Makoto caught her hand. Never in her life has a boy held her hand. She felt herself get red.

She turned around, trying to hide her emotions. "What is it now?"

"Um... I was wondering if you know a girl that's about (height)cm tall, (h/c) hair, and (e/c) eyes that loves to swim?" Makoto asked, his eyes full of hope.

(Name) suddenly felt frustrated. Of course she knew one, it's the girl that's standing in front of you, moron! All the frustration seemed to control her words. "Yes," she said. "I know one."

Makoto's eyes lit up. "Really? Does she go to this school?"

In her mind, (Name) smirked. Maybe I should play around with him... "No," she said, as-a-matter-of-fact-ly. "Why?"

Makoto blushed. Surprisingly, he looked insanely adorable. "Well, I was hoping you would introduce me to her."

(Name) felt a whole plan coming to light. Mess with this idiot's head! "Sure," she said in the nicest way possible. She got out a piece of paper and wrote her number on it. "Here," she said, handing it to a very happy Makoto. "Her name is Nadare, and she's single. Good luck!" (Name) waved before she walked off.

It took a while for (Name) to realize what she just did. Hold up. She just gave a really attractive guy her own phone number, saying it was someone else's. She just lied to a kind person searching for love. Strangely, (Name) felt guilty. 

(Name) took a different way home so she wouldn't run into Makoto. "I'm home," (Name) called. Her tabby cat Billy trotted his way over to her. "Mom's not home yet, huh?" She got some cat food and poured it into Billy's bowl. 

(Name) walked to her room and slumped on her bed, wondering what she was feeling. Her chest felt tight, and she couldn't stop thinking about Makoto. She couldn't stop thinking about how she did a terrible thing to him. She couldn't even imagine how disappointed he will look when she would tell him the truth. How he had just fallen for a social awkward smart girl that likes to play sick tricks on people. 

"Oh man," (Name) said, squeezing a pillow. "I'm such an idiot."
Yeah... Since my two other fanfics are near to an end, I decided to start a new one.
I also can't think of ideas for the other two. They just end up all bleh. *tableflip*

Anyways, I decided to do a Makoto x Reader since Makoto is such a babe.
The reader is like really based off of me... *shoots head*

Sorry for the wait on the other two fanfics, guys. Hope you'll wait patiently ;w; *dies*

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inlovewithitaly Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I was wondering, to make it easier for people who are on their phones (like me) if you could put a link to part 2 in the description box and in part 2, a link to part 3 and in part 3.... You get the idea!
Just a suggestion, you dont have to
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guntopa12 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I put the link for part 2 in the description! thanks for mentioning it though, I didn't realize my readers read my stuff on their phones xD
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inlovewithitaly Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
yeah well I woke up first at a sleepover and was connected to her wi-fi on my phone, so i thought "why not read some fanfiction?"
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guntopa12 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
oh my god, i'm so flattered for some reason >//< thank you for reading!
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inlovewithitaly Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
youre welcome :D
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SoraLyv Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014  Student General Artist
I just had to click on this! My friend calls me "Little otter", so when I saw the title I was like Jonghyun (shinee) 
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guntopa12 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
oh my gosh what a coincidence! :iconhoryshetplz:
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bel-bunny Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013  Student General Artist
just one of those days no?
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LittleNympa Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2013
I love it ^w^
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guntopa12 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh my, thank you so muucchh :iconsupertighthugplz:
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LittleNympa Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2013
All the love to you, dear. <3 Pikachu want it 
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guntopa12 Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
fhdsaflj :iconimdoneplz:
ALL THE LOVE TO YOU TOOOO :iconletmehugyouplz:
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AnimeOtaku8888 Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Great job I love it!
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guntopa12 Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much! ;w; 
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AnimeOtaku8888 Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Np XD
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Boku-no-Biwa Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Student General Artist
I'm gonna ask a very stupid question: What does (h/c) and (e/c) stand for? I know that the c stands for color(right?), but I have no clue about the other two ;(
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guntopa12 Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It's alright! It's not stupid at all, no worries!
(h/c) stands for hair color and (e/c) stands for eye color.
Hope this helped! :D
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Boku-no-Biwa Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Student General Artist
Oh wow, thanks! x3
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guntopa12 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You are welcome!
If you have any more questions, you are free to ask ^^
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Boku-no-Biwa Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2013  Student General Artist
I will, thanks! :D
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Mandabexy Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I didn't know there was this kind of fanfiction! At first I thought it was a meme or something, but then I began to understand better what it was. The reader literally interact with the story! XD kkkkkkkkkkkkkkk

I kind of identify with this character, mainly because she's also lonely at school. Not that I'm unsympathetic or anti-social, is just that I'm shy and it's hard for me make conversation with people I don't know. Also not sure I would have the courage to make such a joke with a guy I barely know, even if he's super handsome *--------*, maybe there was a small chance I could do this, but I think I was more likely to say 'no' and walk away. ^^'

Ah, if only a Makoto appeared in my life... Beautiful, gentle, athletic and tall (Man, you have no idea how much is difficult to find tall guys where I live! Those few who encounter already have girlfriends or are players! ><)

I can't wait to read the next chapter! -^_^-
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guntopa12 Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm glad the reader character fit your description .w.
It's hard to make the personality of the reader sometimes, since there are some personalities that some readers don't like and you have to avoid those kinds of personalities. -w-;

Trust me, I want Makoto in my life too... :iconorzplz:
Sorry to hear about that... Players are bleh >.<
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Mandabexy Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Another feature I have in common with the character is that I'm also (relatively) good at swimming (And is the only sport I really enjoy practicing. Balls and I don't get along. They love hitting my head XD).
The only thing that doesn't suit me is her long hair. Although I used to have long hair, but recently switched to a shorter hairstyle. :iconteeheeneplz:

I see, but it is just impossible you create a personality that pleases everyone. u.u

C'mon, is that so impossible find a guy like him in real life?!
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guntopa12 Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Me too! I love swimming (I'm not necessarily good at it though, haha) and the whole idea of it. I'm exactly like Haruka, actually. I love to feel the water, I love freestyle, I don't care about competitive swimming. Hehe.
But I'm not in LOVE with water. That's something different about me and Haruka. lol
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Mandabexy Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You don't take your clothes off every time you see water, right? XD kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkj Just kidding! I also love to feel the water when I'm swimming ^^
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guntopa12 Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Lol, no I do not xD
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Mandabexy Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Kkkkkkkkkkkkk good XD
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TheMewtwoLady Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Normally I don't like x Reader fanfics, but this is so well written and sounds like me that I really enjoyed it~
(Also I loooove Makoto)
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guntopa12 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm very glad to hear that! Thank you! ;w;
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TheMewtwoLady Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're welcome!  It was fun reading this.  Thank you for writing it!
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guntopa12 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome. ;w; Thank you for reading it. 
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alphonselovescats Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Part 2?
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guntopa12 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yes, I'm working on it ^^
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alphonselovescats Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Sweet!!! XD
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Rima12Mashiro Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
:iconmoarplz: pllllllllleeeeeeaaaaaasssseeeeeee * gives best puppy eyes * part 2 bro ?
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guntopa12 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yes, I'm working on it! xD
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mrsAyasegawa Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Based off of you? Teehee I was beginning to wonder if it was me! Well, kinda me. I used to be very very socially awkward up until I got a job in the library at my old tech school. I worked in there for two years and opened up a lot around strangers/acquaintances. Also, I am very very hyper and crazy around my closest friends ^////^;

Super crazy...I am always compared to an otter ^_^ Playful and mischievous. Otters are my favorite animal!

Good start (: you've got me hooked. Keep up the good work!
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guntopa12 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm very socially awkward, but I do have friends unlike the reader in this story. hehe xP
I'm hyper in front of my friends too, my friend. :iconheroposeplz:

I'm glad you like it! :iconasdfghplz: :hug:
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mrsAyasegawa Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I still get that very uncomfortable feeling in my chest whenever I have to talk to someone I don't know. I dread it. Run through my head all the ways it could go wrong...etc...especially to someone I like >////< my ex-boyfriend was my friend before we dated...even then, I was so shy around him, it wasn't even funny. Hilarious enough, when I first met him, I disliked him GREATLY. He looked like the rough type and I wanted nothing to do with him. Then, I realized he was a good guy and fell head over heels. Then, after almost a year of dating, I realized his temper was killing me and I dumped it. He never hurt me, but he turned into a hard-headed 6 year old who got their crayons taken whenever something (no matter how small) didn't go his way. =_= Oi, Matt. He still chases me to this day!

Wow, I have no idea why I went through that! Hahaha ^^;
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guntopa12 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Don't worry, hun. People always tell me relationship issues xP
Maybe you should tell him how you really feel and to stop bothering you about it. If you did say that and he still bothers you, maybe he really likes you and you should give him a second chance. Idk, I've never been in a relationship ^^;

I have a crush on this guy friend I have but I'm TOTALLY friend-zoned. Like to the max. And he's my best friend's ex so I don't even know why we're friends in the first place. But since we're friends, I'm not so awkward around him. We talk about anime and stuff, and he encourages me to draw ^^ So I think I actually like being friend-zoned. Hehe. 
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mrsAyasegawa Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I broke up with Matt like two months ago, but he keeps messaging me on Skype whenever I get on, telling me how we are going to get married and stuff. I'd love to still be a friend, since we have a lot in common, but this is getting creepy. =_= This is the second guy to do this to me! If he didn't live half-an-hour away from me, I'm sure he would stalk me. Like my ex before him =_=
That's probably why I like Makoto so much ^_^ if only I could find a real guy like him! Sweet and caring all the time, not just a cover-up to make me like him (Matt =_=).

...I've just realized that all my ex-boyfriends turned out to be jerks. First boyfriend dumped me because his friend liked me (I had no interest in him whatsoever), my second boyfriend was actually dumped by me, that was because he just liked me for my boobs, my third boyfriend only dated me to get back at his ex-girlfriend (they're married now and have a kid...wut...), my fourth boyfriend dated me for over two years and cheated on me 3 times and when I broke up with him, he stalked me and tried to be a peeping-tom, and my last boyfriend pretended to be the perfect match when he really wasn't.

I need a break D:

I had a crush on a guy friend of mine just to find out he was gay. Best friend-zone ever. He's like my brother now ^_^
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guntopa12 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh my... You have gone through a lot .w.;
Just tell Matt he is bothering the living crap out of you and it's not helping him to get back with you whatsoever. Tell him to move on and that there are 7 billion other people in the world you can fall in love with. That's what I would do, but I would also say sorry at the end so he won't have any suicidal thoughts.
Makoto is like a girl's dream: Good looking, nice body, acts as nice as Jesus, sweeter than a sugar cane. Too bad I live in the middle of no where where there's only cowboys and farmers. Oh well. xP

To be honest, your first boyfriend is actually a very considerate person. He dumped you because his friend liked you? Wow. That's very selfless of him. :XD:
Sweetie, all guys go for the boobs. I'm on the Internet too much to find out that information. -.-;
THIRD BOYFRIEND... WAHT. KIDS? WAHT. xD 
Glad you're away from your fourth boyfriend. Those kind of men make me sad that I'm human. Cheated on you and wants to get back with you? Who does he think he is, Loki? Because if Loki did that I would forgive him :/

Indeed, you need a break. Hehe. xD

That's great! I wish I had a gay friend :/
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mrsAyasegawa Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Matt said that life wasn't worth living anymore. That's so dramatic, it's crazy.
And you live in the middle of nowhere? I live in a little community that is pretty much all woods. To the right of my house, turkey barns. To the left, a wildlife preserve. It takes 10 minutes to get to the nearest little town and 30 minutes or more to actual civilization. Going out to eat takes a good 30 minute drive ^^; I understand living in the middle of nowhere XD
And Anthony is not selfless. =_= he tried to get back with me so much after that. He was jealous of all my other boyfriends. Then he moved states away. Now he's back, but like 200 miles away. Lucky duck lives at the beach >.<

I have like, 3 gay friends. But only one of them is super close to me ^^;

(btw, did you see that new episode of Free!? OMG)
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guntopa12 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Whaat. xD
Oh my gosh, same here with the 10 minutes away from the nearest town. :iconhighfiveplz:
It takes 30 minutes to go to a ghetto town and an hour to get to a decent town. -.-;

Oh. Well so much for Anthony.
You must be hella pretty for guys to be wanting to get back with you. :XD:

(btw, have you read my latest journal? LOLz)
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